December
13th
2005
Contemplation
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I like it. To be honest though, the first line is somewhat off balance with the rest of it.
ducks, grass, toes, blowing wind and… grey sweats? Unless you intended to throw something out of the ordinary with the rest of the peice in there, of course.
The first line of Dove’s poem refers to “corduroy scuffs” - this is a stretch, but what can ya do, I was drawing a blank.
I actually misread this as “scruffs” the first time; in looking at it again, I should have been referring to shoes or slippers.
But I’m sure there’s something in a shade of grey…
Something in between…
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